The following scene was deleted because Hell's Phoenix had became too long and needed to be shortened. This scene is right after Mads and Nix's tsunami war and right before the Sherlock bar incident. Obviously, it's not been professionally edited!
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“Why
are you here?” Micah asked as he stepped out of the portal from Hell.
Since
entering Hell and accepting the benefits of his covenant, Nix had grown to understand
the appeal Madison once coveted for the King. The fallen angel could be
ruthlessly charming and with a common goal, they got along as thick as thieves.
“I
couldn’t stop thinking about Mads.” Nix flicked his fingers through the fur of
the dog stretched out across his lap and let loose a burst of power. The pooch
jerked to life and whined. Just as quickly, he took the canine’s life away.
“What if I’m wrong, Micah? What if she’s not alive? This hope inside me hurts.
I—” He shook his head and repeated the life and death process with the furry
animal.
Micah
peered at the Alabama home he and Madison once lived in as a married couple.
The same residence Nix spent three months falling in love with her.
“Hope
is like a heartbeat inside me.” The dog’s heartbeat pulsed beneath Nix’s hand. “But
it can be extinguished as quickly as it’s born.” He jerked the life from the
animal.
“Why
do you torture the canine, Phoenix?”
After
setting his plan into motion to lure Mads out of Zen’s protective custody—if she
lived as he believed she did—she’d been so heavily on his mind he needed to be
near her. At the very least someplace that he’d once cohabitated with her.
The
animal had been dead in the street when he came out of the portal. He’d picked
the mutt up and proceeded to practice his mojo. Not out of a necessity to
torture the creature, but the more he employed his Messianic power, the more
fluid it became to manipulate. If Mads were alive, she wouldn’t join them
willingly. It would take time and lots of his magic to convince her to stay
with them.
“I’m
practicing.” Nix shoved another bubble of magic into the dog before setting him
on his feet. A wobble as if the canine were newly birthed, but a second later, the
animal bolted.
“What
makes you so convinced Madison is alive?”
Nix
propped his feet on the railing. “I’ve already told you why.”
“I
know the taste of her intimately, and all I tasted was salt water in the
tsunami. This is Zennyo Ruyo fucking with us, Phoenix.”
“You
sampled her before she started jacking into her demonic side. She’s different
now. Our first kiss, she tasted like fear and innocence. Then you shoved
Pandora’s Box inside her and she had a spicy tang, a darkness that didn’t fit
her personality. In the hotel room, there was fear, but not for herself, for me.
The innocence was there too, but when she climaxed, I felt her, the presence of her soul and the grandeur of how far she’d
fallen. The power she’d already accepted.” Micah bristled and looked away. At odd
moments the fallen struggled with Nix’s sexual knowledge of Mads. “I don’t know
how to describe it better than that, Micah. Do you even realize how much she’s
accepted her succubus? The irony is she’s becoming what you wanted even though
she did it to keep from being what you wanted.” Nix rose from his chair and
approached Micah. “I’m certain she lives. Don’t pretend for a moment she won’t
fight us when we find her.”
“I
wish I felt your certainty, lover.” Micah swiped his fingers through his
chin-length hair. Nix reached out and adjusted a stray strand that cocked at an
odd angle. The King turned his face into Nix’s palm and he caressed Micah’s cheek.
“She’s too vital to me to hope as much as you do, Phoenix.”
Micah
sounded so forlorn, Nix grabbed him by his nape and tried to comfort him by
touching their foreheads together. “Losing her was never an option for me, Micah.”
Micah
kissed him, evoking a response Nix would’ve despised four months ago. “I hope
she’s alive, Phoenix. Sharing her death with you made it easier to bear.”
“If
I’m right”—Nix felt certain that he was—“sharing Mads will construct a magnificent
future for us.”
7 comments:
I love it when the boys play nice together. A rather creepy side of Nix. And a softer, vulnerable side of Micah. It sent shivers up and down my spine. And a rush of lust everywhere else. ;)
Exactly what I was hoping for! Even if I was LOL over the "rush of lust everywhere". Writing my Micah/Nix scenes were some of my faves in Hell's Phoenix.
Huggles,
Gracen
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!
LOL Delphina, you're like Shelley you love dark Nix...and the boys together.
Huggles,
Gracen
Is it wrong for me to really like them being all touchy-feely with one another? Hot guy + hot guy = epic win! Love it!
I also loved the excerpt. I love the closeness that Micah and Nix share. But Bella is right, the dog thing was kinda creepy. I just found this series and read the first two books & the prequel and fell in love with them. I can't wait for the next book. I love Nix and Madison.
OMG good dreams tonight now! WOWSERS...it just went up about 20 degrees in here!! That was great!!!! oh how i love your deleted scenes! I dont know how you do it!!
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