As with all the deleted scenes, they were removed because Hell's Phoenix became too long and it wasn't necessary for the story line. This particular scene comes in right after Madison stabbed Petra (the deleted scene I posted last week) and as Madison and Alessa are headed to the honky tonk bar where they run into Micah and Nix.
Disclaimer: This scene is unedited and was removed from the book prior to submitting Hell's Phoenix to my publisher, Decadent Publishing.
How I picture Alessa
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Madison
cranked her Land Rover, checked the position of her mirror and adjusted the
volume of the radio.
“I
can’t tell you how many times I’ve fantasized about stabbing that demon. What’d
it feel like?” Alessa swiveled in the passenger seat to face Madison.
Madison
sent the other woman a half-hearted smile. “I lost my cool in there.” She
backed out of the garage, hit the button to send the garage door back down and
shifted the vehicle into drive. “Sometimes Petra gets on my last nerve.”
“Madison,
that demon is as fun as lemon juice in your eye. The only two people she doesn’t
affect are Amos and Zen. And nothing bothers Zen.”
Untrue.
Yanking the lid off Pandora’s Box had bothered him very much.
“Buckle
up,” Madison said as she turned left out of the driveway.
“Yeah,
like I’m not about to dive headfirst into steamy waters.” Alessa winked, but
dutifully buckled up.
“You
can still change your mind.” She liked Alessa, respected the woman and had no
problem understanding why Nix liked her too. Maybe if Alessa and Nix hadn’t met
over her husband’s death, they’d have hooked up as a real couple instead of as ‘friends
with benefits’. Maybe once they saved his ass from Micah’s clutches, they could
still have that ‘real’ relationship. She wouldn’t suffer them that privilege.
She wanted Nix to be happy and if that someone turned out to be Alessa, then
Madison would be pleased for them. More than once since meeting Alessa, she
wondered if the horsewoman could be the woman Georgie spoke of, the woman Nix
would end up with.
“How
many times do I have to tell you, my soul is yours?”
“Until
you dive headfirst into steamy waters.” Madison shot her a teasing smile.
“I’ve
already sold you my soul a million times.”
A
million times? That was a bit melodramatic. “It’s not binding yet.”
“I’d
do anything to help Nix. I can’t listen to this shit.” Alessa shut off the
octane radio station. “I love him, not the same way as you, but I still love
him.”
“Don’t
start,” Madison flung up a hand. “I’ll turn that shit on and make you listen to it if you start
chatting about that hogwash.” Not a warning, a promise because Madison wasn’t
in the mood. Strung tight, knowing they were running out of time, she lived on
the edge of panic. She didn’t need the ‘you love him like a lover’ argument
again. It was bad enough she couldn’t get Zen’s comments out of her freaking
head anytime he felt like discussing it. She wouldn’t listen to Alessa discuss
the topic at will either.
“Touché.”
They were silent through three intersections before Alessa broke the silence. “What
do you think Nix is going to say when we show up in Hell?”
“He’ll
be pissed off.” She smiled and made a right-hand turn onto I-459, powered just
over the speed-limit and set cruise. Flying would’ve made this trip easier, but
driving wouldn’t leave a paper trail.
Alessa
snorted. “I think ‘pissed off’ is a mild description of what he’ll feel.”
“You
sure you want to do this, Alessa?”
“I
owe that man my life.”
Most likely she would
pay with her life, but Madison said nothing and neither did Alessa.
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7 comments:
Another great deleted scene! Thanks for sharing with us!! :)
Most excellent! Love Alessa too! I also love that you found someone that embodied the horsewoman, as well as the beauty. Gawd! So many great characters. Thanks, Gracen! <3
As always, you're welcome, Kristina. I have a couple of more to share over the next couple of weeks.
Shelley, can't you just picture "Alessa" in these photos giving the bartender hell in the honky tonk? LOL
Huggles,
Gracen
totally fits her big time! this one i totally agree with.
DAYUM YOU CUT THE SHOUT OUT TO OCTANE!! now i just gave it back to them B-)
another excellent deleted scene. how hard is it to delete scenes<? do u decide? does an editor, beta etc say to cut it? does it hurt to cut them? i think i just interviewed you!!
love ya mamma!!!
Awesome deleted scene!! Love it!!
LOL at Mindy. Damn hard cutting Octane out of the book. ;-) I love me some Octane.
I cut these before the book was ever submitted to the publisher. I've never had an editor ask me to cut a scene, but only rework it. Sometimes it hurts to cut them. I loved the dog one with Nix, so that was tough. And the one I'll post next week was a HUGE alteration to the story that I just didn't have time to add, so I reworked a scene in Hell, so I could take the scene out completely. That once sucked because Alessa's outcome is totally different between the two. You'll see.
Love ya too, girl.
huggles,
Gracen
Thanks, Joella!
Huggles,
Gracen
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