This deleted scene came about right after Madison came out of Hell. In the original storyline, Cael was half-dragon and half-vampire and he saved Alessa by turning her into a vampire rather than Nix saving her when they returned from Hell. Here's the scene after she's been turned and Madison's reaction.
Disclaimer: This scene is unedited and was removed from the book prior to submitting Hell's Phoenix to my publisher, Decadent Publishing.
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Madison
knocked on the bedroom door and Alessa bid her to enter. Thick drapes were
drawn tight. Not an ounce of sunlight filtered through the windows. A single lamp
burned beside the bed.
Alessa
met Madison in the center of the room, her expression overflowing with anxiety.
In the darkness, Madison detected red rimmed eyes, bloody lips and a faint red
stain to the outer edges of her aura.
“Oh,
God,” Madison whispered, horrified by the extent of Alessa’s altercation. “He
turned you into a vampire?”
“Let
me explain,” Alessa said, but Madison didn’t care to listen.
Whipping
around, she found the vampire-dragon and marched to him. Cael held his ground,
watching her approach with a guarded gaze. She grabbed him, pressed her thumb
into the pressure point on his wrist and he dropped to his knees.
“Unfurl
those wings and I’ll whack them off,” she promised. “Blow fire or smoke in my
direction and I will drop you.”
“You
already dropped me,” Cael said mildly, peering up at her without fear.
At
his snarky bravado, Madison whipped out the only weapon remaining in her possession,
the dragon blade. She placed the tip against the pulsing vein in his neck.
The
bedroom door opened and closed quietly. Madison didn’t look to see who entered.
In the murky shadows of the room, it was unlikely she could discern the visitor
anyway.
“Mads!”
Alessa clutched her arm. “I wanted this. He gave me a choice and I’d have died
without him.”
“You’re
dead now, Alessa.” Madison held Cael in her glare. “You don’t breathe, your
heart doesn’t beat and your pulse is nonexistent. That makes you dead. Dead!” She yelled the final word. “I
told you to return her to me unharmed.”
Nix
placed his hand on Madison’s wrist, the one trapping Cael. She shuddered at the
touch, her succubus recognizing him on a physical level without having to look
at him. She didn’t lift her glower off the vampire-dragon.
“Stop
bullying him. She asked for this, Mads.”
Tearing
her gaze off the shifter, she faced Nix. “You accept this?”
How
could he? This was the woman he loved, the woman Georgie spoke about.
“I
don’t like it. The Sherlock in me is spitting-mad, but it’s what she wanted.
For that reason, I accept it.”
Madison
looked between the two men. Releasing Cael with a shove, she shook her head and
closed her eyes. She felt him move away from her.
Madison
ran her hands down her face. She’d gotten Alessa into this mess. This was her fault. She’d killed
hundreds of thousands of people in an earthquake and ultimately her friend too,
a woman she thought of as her sister. All of them dead because of her. She
deserved to die. She deserved the torment of Hell.
She
thought about half of her soul shoved into her pocket, the one she’d snatched
off Micah as she killed him. If she crushed it, would she die? Or would she
need both halves?
“Please
don’t hate me, Mads,” Alessa spoke into the darkness.
Madison
blinked and turned to face her. “I could never hate you.” She hugged the other
woman. “You’re the sister I never had. I didn’t wish this for you.” Pulling
back, she captured Alessa’s hands in both of hers. “I should be asking you for
forgiveness. I dragged you into this mess.”
“You’re
not to blame.” Nothing Alessa said would negate the guilt Madison endured. “I
didn’t have to agree. I could have walked away and you wouldn’t have blamed me,
but saving Nix is worth this new life.”
Madison
glanced at Alessa’s soul shining on her wrist. “You should take this back now.”
“No,”
Alessa shook her head and patted her soul on Madison’s wrist. “I don’t have
this vampire urge under control. Blood is like an elixir. Strangely I don’t
crave yours, but Nix smells pretty damn good right now.” Alessa dragged in a
rough breath as Madison deliberated over the fact that Nix always smelled
pretty damn good to her. “I need to know someone has control of my life if I
can’t get control of my urges.”
“You’re
shaking,” Madison said to change the subject because she didn’t like the idea
of what Alessa implied.
“I’m
starving.”
“I
need to feed her.” Cael draped his arm around her shoulders and pulled her
against his side. Alessa looked tiny and fragile up against Cael.
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i have to tell you, i'm glad you changed this.this vamp thing doesn't work for me in RTH (i mean, once or twice a vamp enemy is ok, but i don't want to see them often) and Madison is a bit unlikeable here (to me)
ReplyDeleteTotally agree with you, Andie! She's very harsh here. Considering her own genetics, you'd think she'd be more understanding. Sometimes scenes just don't work for me and this was one of them.
ReplyDeleteBut all these deleted scenes shows you how involved a story is and how many ways it can change. The original ending of HP was MUCH different than what was published. It's coming up in the next week or so.